I think that what you wrote was very logical.
But, think on this, what if you added a little information? I am
not saying your content is not good, however suppose you
added a title that makes people desire more? I mean 刑事BARN!
is kinda plain. You ought to glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they create post titles to get viewers to click.
You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to get people excited about everything've written. In my opinion, it could
bring your posts a little bit more interesting.