I think everything published was actually very reasonable. But, what about this?
what if you were to write a awesome headline? I am not saying your information is not solid., however what if you added a title to maybe grab people's attention? I mean 刑事BARN!
is kinda plain. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they create post titles to grab people to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a pic or two to get
readers excited about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it would bring your blog a little bit more interesting.