I believe what you published made a bunch of sense. But, think on this, suppose you composed a
catchier title? I am not suggesting your content isn't good.,
however suppose you added something that grabbed a
person's attention? I mean 刑事BARN! is a little plain. You might glance at Yahoo's front page and see how
they create article titles to grab viewers to click. You might add a video or a picture or
two to get readers interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it could bring
your blog a little livelier.