I think what you published was very reasonable.
But, consider this, what if you added a little content? I ain't suggesting your content
isn't good., however suppose you added something to maybe grab people's attention? I mean 刑事BARN!
is kinda vanilla. You should glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they
create news headlines to grab viewers to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a pic or two to get people interested about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it would make your blog a little bit more interesting.